Where we always watched the sun go down as we celebrated another day of love!!
The walk was surprisingly longer this time, can't remember walking this far back then. I thought it was closer than this but then, well..it is what it is. I saw a couple down there, on our very own stone bench or so we used to call it ;-)
They sat there in silence, head to head, cheek to cheek, shoulder to shoulder, hand in hand. Ah! just like how we used to sit!
I watched them as they spoke in silence, a language only they could understand...I watched them for a long time.... cuz that's was all I could do, I didn't want to disturb them.. and so I went back to my own memories all over again, memories of a good old sweet and innocent love....
They somehow reminded me of us, and the bond we used to share.. of the days I read your mind before you spoke it out.. of how annoyed you would feel, cuz I always managed to do that... of the bubbly talks and bouncy walks...
They somehow reminded me of us, and the bond we used to share.. of the days I read your mind before you spoke it out.. of how annoyed you would feel, cuz I always managed to do that... of the bubbly talks and bouncy walks...
I felt like I was slowly being pushed forward by some force...and I was moving closer and closer to those lovely people; I had this strong urge to tell them, to be together always and never let go no matter what.... I didn't know if it was a right thing to say to unknown strangers. But someone from deep inside of me wanted me to do that... I walked and crossed the bench.. and moved forward so I could be face to face with them... and what I saw left me dumbfounded, there I saw us... yes you and me, just like we used to be back then... right there in flesh n bones...I turned back... and ran down the road... back to where I came from ...and while I stopped to catch my breath I realized that walk was... but a walk down my memory lane....
22 Thought(s):
So nice and touching ...i felt like i am in that position...walking.........
I felt am sitting down there on the stone bench .. awww.. its such a good post. Fresh and nice. Loved this so much.
@Nur : hmm am glad I could take you through :-) Thank you!!
@Ashwini : Thanks you soo much... :-)
Awesome, i'm already crying :'(
Good old days ... miss those days..
Very touching!!
-Ugri
Thanks Ugri!!!
Very Touching Heroine!!!
Its a very very good post
i hate sad endings :( hate it more wen it comes from bubli ppl like u :( good for a fiction though!
@Mrudu : Thanks darling.. you really don't have to call me heroin in a public forum :P
@Ashi : Awww no feeling sad my dear
@Anil : Well bubbly me will soon be writing another one with a happy ending :-) so smiiiiile
thts the spirit :P
Very Good Sigma...Nice thought and style...Keep writing...
Thanks Sreeja!!!
So they aren't separated? I was so sure there was a sad ending, so glad there isn't:)
Beautiful language..
@Priyanka : Well.. I've left that to the imagination of the reader :-) and Thank you!!!
good one dear..! nice! u got tht perfect ending... ;)
Gee.. Thanks buddy!!
Awesome Sig...As usual..finished up with nostalgia feelings... :)
in bw the theme is very beautiful and soft...happy twilights...
Thank dear... and yeah i had a tough time getting a template which I felt was apt... and am glad people are liking it :)
Very beautiful!
Lovely :)
The Twerp and I
@Dipinni : Thank you :-)
@Jellybelly : Thank you...
Touchy!! just few lines but I could picturize it and felt as if I watched a tele-film
:) Thanks Bab
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